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Wyndy: in a Heartbeat #Amazon Price Matching

Dear Readers,


Usually my posts are a bit longer and deal with entertaining plot bunnies, or magical concepts within my writing.


Today's post is much shorter. Recently, I decided to take this short story, Wyndy: in a Heartbeat off of the online vender website, Smashwords. 


Posting on that website gave me the opportunity to offer you a FREE Read and it became easily accessible when Amazon price matched.


Unpublishing at Smashwords means that eventually Amazon will catch up. When that happens, the price of Wyndy: in a Heartbeat will go back up to .99 cents.


Honestly, I haven't decided if I will leave it published after a price increase.


So today, I'm notifying you that if you've seen this FREE short story (1807 words + 1k flash fiction) and have hesitated downloading, now is the time to take advantage of the FREE status. 


Thank you. 



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Amazon Kindle: Concentric Circles (Shayla's story)
Claire: the Lost Fae ~ Available Now


Wyndy: in a Heartbeat ~ Short Story [here] 



Peace & Love be with you always.
Aithne Jarretta
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Mother, Daughter & Plot Bunny Tracks, Oh My! #amwriting

It’s all about the reading experience. This is a well known fact. At least in my experience it has been. 

Through the years I spent solely as a reader, the authors I loved created worlds where I could simply vanish. *poof* 

That was the pleasure of journeying between the book covers.

Hours spent with imaginative characters eased the other stresses in life.

Then one day I sat on the couch and started writing a story. That became a new adventure and carried me into new realms of magic.

I will be honest, despite years of education; I discovered there was much to learn. ;)

In a million ways it has been the best thing for me. I mean those years spent learning to put my stories into my computer and eventually onto paper. Then the culture shifted and digital ink has become the biggest invention since the printing press. (saw a tv program ranking Kindle #52 in top 100 21st cent. gadgets)

Here we are now on this Internet webpage, where I write about my joy of story telling and the modern tools with which to share them. Yowza!

And guess what? It still comes down to the reading experience for each individual reader. Readers want to delve into the imaginative worlds and journey next to each character as if they are right there with them. Readers want to feel and understand the story they are reading.

That’s a very particular concept when it comes to writing paranormal. Writing magic and sending you on a journey you may have never experienced before is definitely one of my favorite challenges.

So when I write about wind-riding or being confronted by a daemon when he isn’t supposed to be able to see the invisible heroine, those story elements are super charged with magic and fun.

Then we have the not so magical aspects like… Do you really know everything about your mother? Would you even want to?

Frankly, since I’m an author sandwiched between mother and daughter characters, there have been challenges when writing their stories.

Daughter Shayla was very disgruntled to discover her mother Claire knew about wind-riding, the magic in their shared locket and the fact that Shayla’s conception had mystical significance. Naturally, these secrets qualify as important things mom never told Shayla.

About Claire? As a mother, she really didn’t want her daughter Shayla knowing about childhood difficulties, her deep-seated angel issues and the crimson boots of bling. (ß this is my modern term…one which annoys character Claire… ;)

It’s all in the ‘stuff mom never told you’ and would you really want to know if she ever did.

But if you think about the story differently, you discover that Claire had excellent reasons for keeping certain information to herself. As parents, we all want to protect our children from the big bad world. (okay, crimson boots have nothing to do with the big bad world)

So keeping secrets for protective reasons is usually acceptable as a parent.
As an author? vbg 

Keeping story secrets can be fun. Sometimes revealing those secrets in little pieces of plot bunny tracks can literally make us dance in anticipation.

At any rate, thanks to digital ink, story secrets can be spread across the ‘net with awesome delight. 

Let’s not forget that the enjoyment for your leisurely moments can and does affect how we feel as we go about our other real life duties.

So take a break. You've earned it. Curl up with a magical book, explore the world in a way you've never experienced and indulge in the magic! Now that's pure ambrosia for your romantic spirit.

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If You Missed these Plot Bunny Tracks:
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Amazon Kindle: Concentric Circles (Shayla's story)
Claire: the Lost Fae ~ Available Now


Wyndy: in a Heartbeat ~ Short Story [here] 


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Peace & Love be with you always.
Aithne Jarretta
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Spring Forward! (in time) #SampleSunday of Magic

Did you survive your leap through time this morning? I'm referring to the time change we go through twice a year. 


I could could put a magical plot twist on the event, but for now I'm going to remain peaceful and enjoy my quiet Sunday. While I'm at it, I promise to avoid all ley lines. (see bio...)


Oh yeah, thanks Ben Franklin for coming up with an idea that can shift our daily lives with a touch of chaos. ;) 


Baby schedules go wack-o (at least it did for my kids), overnight jobs are bizarre and then there's the time spent running around changing all the clocks that don't automatically shift to the new hour. (note to self: turn cell phone off...then reboot...)


So in celebration of Spring Forward for Spring, I'm giving my Twitter Followers & Visitors the opportunity to explore within the pages of Concentric Circles.


Enjoy.


Description:  Shayla Brinawell comes from a fragmented family. Fearful of the dangers her daughter could face, Shayla’s mother raised her to deny and hide her magical gifts. Shayla is about to have her world turned upside down and every other which way. Witch way that is. She must come to terms with her magical destiny in hyper drive.


Meekal Chilkwell has always known his life purpose. To protect the magical and healing waters of The Chalice Well located in the shadow of the great mystical Tor in Glastonbury, England. A new danger has arisen. One that threatens not only the Chilkwell family, but also the non-magical world.


Shayla & Meekal join together to conquer Syther the Quitch, an evil wizard bent on spreading darkness.


Concentric Circles grabbed me the minute I started reading and didn't let go. Fast-paced and well-written, I LOVED this novel! Guess I'm a sucker for books that keep me turning the pages.
~ Sky Purington ~




Excerpt from Chapter Eight: Death Knell


After eating, Shayla and Meekal walked through a hidden panel in the library to an upper room serving as an oversized closet. “This is where we store the linen and paper goods for the guests who stay here at the manor. It’s mostly Mari Bree and Harry who use this particular secret passage.” Meekal closed the cupboard door they stepped through and a mythic shroud surrounded them with a sense of the past.
Shayla studied the many drawers and doors built into the wall on either side. A chill traveled through her. “Kal?”
He motioned to the wall beneath a small leaded window. “Yeah, this is where two monks stayed. Their cots were there. The cupboards are a later addition.”
The window let in a sliver of distorted moonlight, casting them in silver.
“Spooky.”
“Aye. Come this way,” Meekal whispered, wrapping his fingers protectively around hers.
Next, they stepped out into the upper hall. Plush carpet padded their footsteps as Shayla followed Meekal past portraits, artifacts and live plants adorning the upper hall.
He led her to a narrow stairwell at the far end. The first surprise Shayla received was that the stairwell was an optical illusion. Three pie-shaped steps turned to the right only to end in a black wall carved with a door. Close inspection revealed the illusion of his bedroom entrance.
“Surprise.”
“How?”
“This way,” Meekal said, mischievously. He moved his hand forward to the shelves that graced the end of the hall next to the fake stairs. The oak shelf before Shayla boasted several figurines: a unicorn, a wooden box carved with runes and a Crusader helmet. The helmet was fascinating. It was made of steel with narrow eye slits on the crossbar of the symbolic cross of the Crusades. Fleur-de-lis terminals embellished the sacred symbol. Meekal’s finger glazed over the brass cross, following its shape. “Pernicious.”
Shayla’s brows rose sharply.
“No one will ever guess that’s my keyword,” he said, while he readjusted the helmet’s position on the shelf. “Even Harry doesn’t know it. Follow me.”
Shayla stepped through the doorway that had opened when Meekal spoke. “Why doesn’t Harry know? I thought he is your best friend.”
“His twisted sense of protecting me. We hang out elsewhere when we’re together. Stubborn prat. Anyway he prefers the Tor or Harry’s Pub when we take time to socialize.” The book shelves swung closed behind them, latching with a soft click.
“Pernicious was the Raven Prince. He was Fyr’s da and the person who sent Black Bry to Glastonbury. You’ll learn the history later. Perhaps Fyr will tell you.”
“Okay,” Shayla said, dragging the word out as she focused on the thickly carpeted narrow stairs wending upward. They stepped into Meekal’s room. His upper floor bedroom spanned the full size of the manor. The steps carried them up to the middle of the chamber.  
The bed dominated the right side, its presence powerfully bold due to four posts rising almost to the pitched ceiling. The ceiling, marked with both heavy wood beams and modern skylights, crowned with everything with perfection. “Wow.”
“That’s why I like it up here,” he replied, voice filled with humor and pride. “I have a full view of the gardens below and the summer sky above. I’ve never been able to decide which I like best, the stars on a clear night or snow falling from the heavens.”
Shayla reached for the intricately carved bedpost. The ancient oak, hand carved with leaves and grapevines, hinted at a story. Heavy ripe fruit looked so real they tempted one to pluck them. “Kal, why grapes?”
“You don’t know? Grapes are connected with the vine mentioned in the Bible. You know, the blood of Christ? The bed has been in the family for generations. Mum wanted more modern pieces so she gave this one to me.”
At the opposite end of the room, a desk and low book shelves stood before a wide window overlooking the garden. She walked around a half wall where a flat screen TV hung, past Meekal’s workout area to a portrait positioned on the right-hand side over the desk. Ignoring the books scattered on the desk and surrounding shelves, Shayla studied the portrait closely. “Kal, is this it?”
“Aye. See the stone archway in the background?”
“Yes.” The portrait was currently empty of people. It depicted a warm summer day. She squinted, positive she could see the breeze teasing the leaves on the trees. The background was of an English hill where a ruin stood in blazing defiance of the apparent destruction of the rest of the structure.
Meekal leaned in close. “Focus,” he breathed into her ear.
Eyes glued to the archway and the sky through it, Shayla whispered, “Travel into a portrait. So cool.”
A soft breeze transported them.
“Anything’s possible with magic.”
Shayla gasped. Turning quickly, she gazed into Meekal’s room from the inside of the portrait. Her palm rested on the cool stones giving her evidence of the truth of their journey.
“Good evening to ye.”
Shayla’s head followed the voice behind her. With hands and knees shaking, she whispered through her shock, “Hello.”
Meekal grasped her elbow, leading her to a short rock wall on the interior side of the ruin. “Here, Shay. Sit.”
“Morna told me. I dinna believe.”
Shayla swallowed her own disbelief and looked up into a near perfect mirror image.
“Shay,” Meekal said gently, “this is Keira. Keira, this is Shayla.” Meekal looked from one to the other. “Well, there is a slight difference in your hair color and…”
Shayla glared at him. “Kal.”
Meekal chuckled, his shoulders shaking.
Keira smiled and laughed. The sound was musical within the confines of the broken ruins around them.
“Where are we?” Shayla stood and looked around, no longer shaking.
“This was Wiston Castle.”
“How am I supposed to get the bezoar stone from here?”
“It isna here right now,” Keira said, with a smile. “Bry will come if need be.”
“That’s right, Shay,” Meekal said. “Want a tour?” 
She looked up at the wave of the broken wall. The stones of a lone archway had the look of timelessness. The intricate masonry work drew her attention. “How old is this castle? There isn’t much of it left.”
Keira motioned Shayla to follow. “The original keep of the motte and bailey was built by Gwys. Some knew him by his Latin name, Wizo. He died in eleven hundred thirty. It was taken in battle several times by different warriors and has a history of falling to treachery.”
“Shayla likes history.” Meekal said and continued for Keira. “Wiston is considered one of the best surviving motte and bailey castles. There are only five others that boast a stone keep on their summits.”
“Pfft. I love history. Get it right, love,” she said, jesting. She stopped at the top of a line of stairs built into the earthen hillside. For some reason, the stones brought to mind the thought of journeys into the unknown. She paused at the top and turned to look at the exterior of the keep.
The wall was several feet thick, broken away in some areas indicating both bombardment and the erosion of time. Shayla inhaled deeply and lifted her hand tentatively to touch the grey stones. A harsh, piercing scream penetrated her pores. She shivered, pulling her hand back in surprise.
“Shay?”
Shaking the feeling off, she turned to face the vista stretching northward. The English countryside around them rolled downward in a steep hill. The high ground of the structure was considered the motte. Below, the earth leveled until it reached an old stone wall with a split wood gate.
A rambling manor sat against the hillside. The roof was slate grey. It rested, nestled by the green rise of the outer bailey, sheltered by tall trees.
Keira’s voice cut through her thoughts.  “That’s the medieval house built much later.”
Meekal hissed, a frown crossing his face, he tugged on Shayla’s hand. “We need to get back. Something’s wrong.” Turning to Keira, he said, “Sorry, to cut this visit short. See you later.”
Keira only had time to give Shayla a soft smile and a nod.
“How can you tell there’s something wrong?”
“The portrait. There’s a ley line running right through it.”
Shayla and Meekal landed in Meekal’s bedchamber to the sound of bells tolling.
“What’s that?”
Meekal tilted his ear toward the window. “Church bells.” Shaking his head, Meekal guided her toward the stairs and down.
The bells tolled without stop, timed to perfection and tone.
“Damn.”
“Kal?”
“Hurry,” he urged, leading her through the bookcase into the upper hall where they met Joseph Chilkwell.
He handed them each a vest. “Good. You’re back. Here.”
Shayla stared at hers.
“Armor. Put it on. It will protect you from some spells and bullets.”
“Bullets?”
“Just in case.”
“But,” she said, trying to shift disbelief away.
“It’s a Death Knell,” Meekal said, thrusting his arm into the vest. “Somebody has died. It’s probably Syther letting us know.”
Her heart flipped. Breathing erratically, she pulled the vest on and followed them down the stairs to meet Chaeli and Harry in the foyer.
Harry greeted them with only a slight nod and turned to Joseph. “They’re at St. Dunstan’s Chapel. Mum called James. They’re on their way.”
“Shayla, have CIARANLEXISS ready.” Joseph stilled and waited for her to retrieve him from her boot.
Coming up after reaching down for her sgian dhu, Shayla met Meekal’s eyes, and bit nervously on her lower lip.
“Ah, the anticipation of battle.” CIARAN sounded excited.
Shayla tried to act nonchalant and ignored CIARANLEXISS by refusing to respond verbally. Instead, she clutched him tightly.
A spiral of air carried them to the chapel.






[novel rated *R*]
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Plot Bunny Tracks ~ Scratch & Sniff #amwriting

In the wake of Wednesday this week I'd like to get back on track and share some story plot bunny. 


Recently, I've visited several blogs where they discussed using 'smell' within their stories. 


There was even one discussion between, scent - smell - odor, and which word was appropriate. ;)


I have to be honest. I've never given this particular plot issue much thought. The way I see it, if the scene calls for a character to notice a smell, then it must be a natural progression to the plot.


Over think it or debate which term to use? I don't think so. 


You see, although writing stories has aspects of being 'a job,' I'm in it for the joy that comes from creating magical worlds of entertainment and offering them through Amazon.


I've always been an avid reader (thanks mom) and my dad was a great storyteller. Those two elements of reader and genetic storyteller blended together and I became a writer. ;)


Yes, I've used scents many times within the boundaries of my stories, but it's usually because the odor can carry readers into the depths of those magical worlds I love creating.


From Concentric Circles:


  The chamber Shayla landed in was large, lit by four torches burning in cauldron styled sconces. A low smoldering fire, in a black hearth across from her, emitted the scent of incense and gave an aura of insidious mustiness. The smell filled her sinuses with the urge to sneeze.


If I recall correctly, I was a bit peeved with Shayla's character muse that day so I sent Shayla on a wild and very windy ride. It was a blast. vbg 


During the writing I didn't stop to think over the process. Instead, the story spun from a wild wind ride, landed in a den of wicked danger, and then propelled Shayla back to safety upon a powerful moment of magical insight.


Whew!


Even during the hours of editing and rewrites the plot concept of smell didn't enter into the changes. I truly believe it's because the moment blended in seamlessly. 


The above example isn't the only time I've used scent within story lines. 


Joe Konrath, a really cool indie author, says "A successful writer is one who can defend every single word in their story. Because the ones they can't defend should get cut."


I tend to agree with Mr. Konrath about defending the words we use in our stories, but I hope that newbie authors out there in cyber space don't think they have to defend or explain using the natural five senses within their stories. There are already so many aspects authors fret over now days. 


Let's please not forget the JOY of Writing. When joy surrounds us during the writing process, then the story comes together with a synergy that will entice readers. They will feel it and enjoy reading our creative offerings.



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If You Missed these Plot Bunny Tracks:


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Amazon Kindle: Concentric Circles (Shayla's story)
Claire: the Lost Fae ~ Available Now


Wyndy: in a Heartbeat ~ Short Story [here] 



Peace & Love be with you always.
Aithne Jarretta
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